tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post3940260338515964380..comments2024-02-28T22:27:44.676-06:00Comments on Sue Barr : WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS #16Sue Barrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-1269497519519824092017-02-01T10:38:03.694-06:002017-02-01T10:38:03.694-06:00Congratulations, Sue.
An excellent snippetCongratulations, Sue.<br /><br />An excellent snippetKim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-331527301422431272017-01-30T00:50:28.817-06:002017-01-30T00:50:28.817-06:00Congrats! :DCongrats! :DAmy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-59285601467060566682017-01-29T19:24:37.727-06:002017-01-29T19:24:37.727-06:00I have to admit I liked the word 'cleave' ...I have to admit I liked the word 'cleave' as well. It means he did so with purpose. I'm really liking this hero.Sue Barrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06347249118943488564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-43683859099688093242017-01-29T17:58:10.674-06:002017-01-29T17:58:10.674-06:00I know that feeling, all alone in a crowd... Very ...I know that feeling, all alone in a crowd... Very evocative snippet.<br /><br />Congrats on completing your WIP!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-45012669350883668742017-01-29T17:31:17.727-06:002017-01-29T17:31:17.727-06:00I agree with Ed. Your choice of the word, "cl...I agree with Ed. Your choice of the word, "cleaved" is perfect. Good snippet. Congrats on finishing the WIP!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-69788916420972129862017-01-29T15:26:57.838-06:002017-01-29T15:26:57.838-06:00I'm glad someone is looking out for her. Great...I'm glad someone is looking out for her. Great snippet.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-2058568481853864972017-01-29T13:45:36.103-06:002017-01-29T13:45:36.103-06:00"Cleaving" his way through the crowd ......"Cleaving" his way through the crowd ... that feels like the perfect word for your era.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-65443694689864011572017-01-29T13:35:48.411-06:002017-01-29T13:35:48.411-06:00Congratulations on finishing. Always such a great ...Congratulations on finishing. Always such a great feeling. And a lovely snippet. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-55543353128142525092017-01-29T08:32:03.946-06:002017-01-29T08:32:03.946-06:00Lovely the way you've captured the essence of ...Lovely the way you've captured the essence of the time. Well written. Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317810105915057272.post-78286297850837243672017-01-29T06:45:26.327-06:002017-01-29T06:45:26.327-06:00Congrats on The End!!! What fabulous milestone an...Congrats on The End!!! What fabulous milestone and the beginning of so much more work to come! Lovely excerpt, filled with sensual description giving Nathan the chance to play rescuer. Well done!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.com